very nice very nice
very nice very nice
Thanks! :) I made it a few years ago, wanted to try upload some stuff here :D
good BUT it has very little buildup, you're thrown mid-action right away, I felt like I had no time to get in the mood. The style is original tho
I kind of wanted it like that just because it is the prologue. Just the taste to get interested. Chapt 1 is a regular story, I didn't want to do it first because, being episodic, people are not going to stick around if the first part is slow and character/world building and it doesnt immediately grab thier attention
gee, thanks for the guilt trip
Haha did it work? But seriously we're gonna release the animations for free anyway. Support not necessary but appreciated. :)
Really quaint and cool, love the black and white pencil style. The only thing I'd keep an eye out is the audio, it sounded a bit sloppy like it needed compression or equalization, watch out for those muddy low frequencies on the voices!
Thanks for the feedback. I'll keep an eye on the audio in the future.
great work!
Thank you!
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yeah, that happens
same
superjail-ish, the ending with the stop-motion and meme's was the best part in my opinion
Yes I am a big superjail fun I hope you like it .
Keep at it, the plot looks pretty solid, I'd try to get the context to be more realistic, there's a million ways to do that, adding animation to the water, leaks, grit on the walls, ambient sounds mixed at a low levels so they don't cover voices. Vocals sound a bit too reverbed, probably the room they're being recorded on lacks acoustic treatment? Animations could use some love too.
Overall it looks raw but there's something there
Time to go over a few of your points. There is a slight movement in the water, there's no need to have it flowing. Leaks? Why? Grit on the walls? They're all textured gritty enough. Vocal wise, everyone was free to record their voices in their own times in their own homes. I no longer have the setup since having to move house to provide a recording area, so this was the next best thing.
After viewing your two "movies" which barely resemble any form of real animation, you're not one to judge anybody on the effort put into animation.
Grow up.
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